This was the final draft of my Animatic, cut together with my completed shots. I made this for our progress videos to show the lecturers where we were at. The feedback we got was very encouraging as across the board everyone could see consistency in the characters. However, there was parts which I noticed which I want to fix, such as changing the timing on certain scenes. I also decided to remove the scene where Fern walks forward as I think it is unnessicary to the story and I can spend time making other shots better instead.