Storyboard one: Rough draft

Second Draft:

Draft 3:

After some discussion with Alec and the group, it was pointed out that a solid colour would work better than a soft brush because it is easier to show the depth in the images. It was also suggested by my group that in shot 12 the size of Fern should be adjusted so that she is smaller in comparison to the hand, thus looking scarier and more intimidating. I also discussed how scene 6 could be improved by moving the arm into the frame more to show the action better.