Semester 2 Week 9 – One to One Tutorials

Morning Class:

During this morning’s class I worked on compiling the secondary animation that is ready for lineart as we waited for Michael to come round with feedback.

-Feedback-

– Lolli’s arm in scene 17D-E needs to overshoot more before pinning the photo to the cork board

– Background for scene 22 needs to be redone and add a candy tumbleweed to the background

– In scene 23 Lolli’s arms need to scoop more, they’re too stiff

– The arch of Gumball’s back in scene 25 is better but there needs to be a stronger sense of tension as he pulls the cake from Lollipop. Add a slow, shaky pull to Gumball’s arms and cake as the camera moves and hold it after the camera stops moving before the cake flies

– For scene 30, place the crying child in the centre and hold on Lollipop and Gumball’s looks of shame a bit longer before they have their idea

– Flip scene 31

– Make them look more satisfied in scene 32 instead of upset/depressed

– Same with scene 33

– For scene 35 it could be that after the photo is taken it zooms out to show it pinned to the corkboard then fade to black

Afternoon Class:

During the afternoon we focused on adding the newest animation clips into the rough cut of the film and adjusting the other scenes based on feedback.

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Homework/Assignment:

For homework, we focused on adjusting the scenes based on feedback and working towards finishing all the secondary animation and compiling it into a rough cut of the film for after the Easter break.