This is the type specimen I have chosen for critique. I chose this design out of the other two designs because it was simple and bold, and stood out from the two other designs. Below is a quick preview of the design.
After getting feedback for my work, I was advised to make the text bigger so that more of the letters are cut off and also to remove ‘Created in’ and ‘By’. I took the feedback on board and produced the works below.
I changed the size of the font and I put the name and date within the letters. I also decided to experiment with a different colour other than black. The image below is my final type specimen screen for the typeface Futura.