Following feedback from Pauline and Kyle in Friday’s Group Critique Session, I went back into Figma and made the specific changes to my type specimen screen which were necessary in order to make improvements. I played about with the text and layout. I felt the simple designs where the best.
Here is 2 decides images before and and after the feedback i recieved. I think it defintely is a improvement. I will continue to work on the overall layout and text of my type specimen screen.