For our tutorial week part 2 (week 11) I had worked on my Animation, my blog and essay that day before my session with on of the tutors. I had my chat with Ryan near the end of class and shown him my essay on virtual bands. He had given me tips and suggestions on my essay even if he hadn’t read it all. For one the titles making sure it relates to the question and answer, breaking paragraphs into sections and finally focus on the good for one thing and the bad thing for the other for the section overall it was a good lesson.