Afternoon Class:

During this afternoon class, I got my one to one from Yuan at 2:40pm. I received some feedback.

-Feedback-

– Find more articles about Studio Ghibli in general

– Add a paragraph as the start of my introduction to arouse my readers interest

– Add a paragraph to the first chapter that shows my argument and opinions before going into analysis.

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