Tutorial Talk with Yuan

Just had my one to one tutorial talk with Yuan for how much progress I’ve done for my dissertation and what needs fixing so I’m on the right direction. First was the title, it was too long as I have to keep it brief and avoid repetitive language as it must be short and concise. For the introduction it must be spit into two for balance as one paragraph is the context of hybrid animation and examples like movies and tv shows that would be included within the coursework and the other I will analyse for this dissertation with no first person like me, I or you within the dissertation including the conclusion.

Section 1 – Make sure to add ‘Figures  1,2,3…etc’ before the image when taking a good look at the photo before moving on. I also needed to change the structure of the dissertation from 2D/3D, techniques, the impacts and Sony’s Spiderman with the conclusion with no first person pronouns. I also need to watch out for repetitive language and the middle section/main body should include arguments to answer the question.