Timing for Animation Week 12

For our final module class before the Christmas holidays, we presented our most recent progress after our last feedback previous week. I made a presentation with my most recent progress after adjusting the last improvements and what is my plan for this week and the next before posting my submissions on the 19th December. Here was my latest update where I had made my last improvements with the leading scene walk, lip syncing and more movements with character B. Using the inspirations I’ve recorded I was able to greatly understand and gained knowledge of what I was missing for that scene to acknowledge it more in my common sense. 

Afterwards I got only a few notes from my lecturer Sarah as my animation was coming along much better for this week, as I only needed to change the staging a bit for Character B’s position to move closer to the centre of the scene closer to Character A. Another was to watch the timing when adding in between frames and the actions of both characters and finally the composition with the references I have recorded for one or two of the shots I have recorded for inspiration. My goal is to gain the feedback I received from my module class and send off my last update the following week before submissions if I needed anymore support and guidance just before the Friday. 

Here is most recent version for the post production phase once for a few in-between frames and clean ups down below. Once I showed Sarah this for any final feedback once we were off for the Christmas break for my most recent improved scene. She gave me feedback on Discord saying “in terms of the animation the steps once she picks up the plate and before she smashes it feel really fast and the second character feels a little static at the end but as time is limited don’t worry too much about the steps but I would focus pre on getting more reaction from the second character”. Taking in her feedback I became confident in my skills and techniques for me to make these improvements in my limited time then add in few minor movements to then finally make it to the clean up stage to make the characters more see through and better looking when I reached to my final video stage.