After gaining new feedback over the course of the week, I needed more improvements once I got my new shot included as Character B had to have more movement with the arms, expressions and a mouth compared to A. I also to fix the intro/leading scene when Character A walks into view for their legs looked off as it looks like they’re moving too fast or running in that certain shot. I later recorded myself to help with the fast walking shot with Character A and B’s movement to give it a more of a an response after I captured it so I knew the time and spacing perfectly using real life reference even by myself to capture the motion of the small walk of anger.
For minor fixes, the scene required the mouth lip syncing to Character A to match with the time they’re mouth would stop speaking which was in case to close it and more roughs and movements to their head. Character B as the same as they’re moving to much little when rotating and to make the animation more smoother after doing the roughs and smoother Arcs. Here is this weeks progress with the references I recorded beforehand.
I was able to record myself better this time for a wide shot and was able to edit both shots together using the symmetry and rule of thirds lines to give both versions space to edit with my mobile phone at a better stance to view myself but a couple of seconds had been off once added and edited together but all was good for what I had got in the end.