A week before the easter break was our one to one talk for week 9, each of us had our one to one with our lecturers Yuan or Ryan for the one week and then swap with the other one to show our progress on our essays. 

When I had my discussion with Yuan she had given more ideas on what I should be focusing on within the essay and how it can help me focus on the animation part while talking about other virtual bands, the origin and showing what they comply to the audience and what makes them different from each other, which then can be included within the essay plus references added within the very end.