After receiving some feedback we decided to change a few of the models and some of the textures, i went ahead and made a texture pack for the group so that the models would all look the same and as we were told quite frequently that our models were different and didn’t feel like they had a flow to them, alongside this ive made a few new models just for the area!
Here is ther feedback we recived from the industry people
First Crit
Text up for longer
have a prompt Disconnect from cinematic and game play change camera
Let loose have indication on where to go next – light text prompt something at least
Aimless
Add output log and have all of the previous text come up
Auto play option along side click option
Indication of what person is talking or what text is coming up but if clarity
Make font bigger
Half transparent background for the text
Disconnect between 2d 3D and ui Likes bold white text, evident as a hover state, some text dark when not the focus, boarder semi transparent somethin give that clarity
Collab between ui and 2d 2d shader implimemt the 2d more more characterised
Wanna go more realistic or more toony together a bit more, doesn’t feel connected
Clean the textures
Too much of a disconnect pull them together
Game feel main points
Add the sounds in
Make it a 2d 3D hybrid If u want to get thru the narrative fast cut content
Fix the bathroom walls
Make things look dirty
Really high up and also manually click off
Have a full ref board for ui
Tiny bit of music put in in dawg
Fix the font the spreading across the screen
Permanently have a ui Add more of the models
from this i enforced the use of the texture pack and the style guide i had made weeks ago as it was evident people were not using it which was upsetting as it lead to a disconnect.
i also made a few more models during this time, i had asked about the pivots on the desk as well so that the desks would work
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