Today we stared going over dates for our lessons with the Teachers. My dates for the tutorials are 17h April and 1st of May. I also gave my Essay to Yuan to look over and give me advice for. One of the things she said was that my essay reads more like a story rather than a professional insight, with more descriptive and emotive inflections and I haven’t made my own opinion on Richard Williams’ legacy. I realise that my writing style is not suitable for an academic setting, and with this in mind I want to endeavour to research how an academic paper is written so I can apply it to my own essay.