Lyndsey’s storyboard so far + her designs
For my version of the board I liked Lyndsey’s storyboard panels from 1 to 6 that show the establishing shot of the candle and the battle between the two spirit groups at the start. Then my board is an alternate version of Lyndsey’s 7th and 8th panels but also continues the story. So basically, the short would start with Lyndsey’s first 6 panels and then continues to mine. I also used her designs for the candle shrine + characters for my storyboard.
My initial storyboard thumbnails of questionable quality:
My cleaned storyboard:
First Pass Animatic (No Sound):
With Sound:
I think some timing needs tweaked, the shot where the helmet spirit reveals lights on his weapon could possibly be faster and then leave more room for the intro battle sequence, when that gets added in. The sound effects also a bit goofy at the moment but I think help to convey what happening a little better.