I got my final feedback. I still had too much mouth movement in a short amount of time, though it was a quick fix thankfully.

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This is my final animation before the feedback:

 

 

I made sure I had interesting secondary animations, like the cup and chair, other than the hair and scarf. I had fun with the cup making sure it accompanied the two smacks on the table the character did, which helped show how much strength she used when hitting the table.

• Audio was also a way to add to the existing audio of the lip-sync. They were all found online.
• The props were all made by myself.

After fixing the issues I mentioned previously it was mostly about taking time and breaks from the animation to avoid overwhelming myself and asking for feedback from friends and family so it would help me get a different perspective.