After speaking with one of my lecturers, Alec, he suggested adding some secondary actions into my existing animations, such as the singer tapping her foot or blinking to make the footage more dynamic. As well as this, he also suggested I slow down the speed of the smoke coming from the detective’s cigarette, as it is currently rapid. As well as this, I’ve realised that I have animated the detective’s hand backwards, so I’ll have to fix that as well, but I have the majority of the animation done, it just requires some adjustment.
Below is another link to my progress so far;
[You will also be able to see that I have re-done the first and second shots for cleaner movement, as pictured below;]
