This week we were split into small groups to present our brand so far and receive feedback from Daniel and our peers. I found this critique to be really helpful – especially for helping me with my visual marque. Daniel suggested that I change it as he couldn’t really see the sun image and pointed out that the ‘N’ sun-rays just looked mainly like N’s around a semi-circle. Seeing as I wasn’t too sure about this visual marque to begin with, this has helped push me to try some new ideas.
I’ve also decided to try adding some sort of background to my monogram as the lettering alone looks quite plain.