30% of the module grade is based on the app
this is a low-stakes opportunity to promote and measure your knowledge and skills; it’s a great way to find areas in which you need to improve.
This has somewhat been lost for us due to not having the studio experience, try to do this digitally as much as possible. It’s a great way to learn from each other.
It’s about providing a mirror for others to reflect on their work/performance so they can identify improvements that can be made. It’s an awesome way to become more efficient.
The sandwich approach
Begin your feedback with positive, share your criticism and end your response with something positive or encouraging. Be CONSTRUCTIVE never negative
Visually it looks good, likes the wave.
The type is heavy for the fun facts – try a lighter one
The headings are nice
Apply the little bullet point symbol
Line up body text alongside the heading – spacing to the left in Jonah is ok but o the left its off
Keep the margin if you will the same
The text is hard to read on the wave – it does not stand out well
The arrow steams should be thicker
Could imply that there is more content bellow
I then took the feedback on board and made the necessary changes
This is what the changed screens looked like