This week I worked more on scene 17, I adjusted the arc of Lollipops arm by switching the direction of the rotation to help the movement have more follow through. I also added a silhouette of Gumball getting annoyed, this still needs to be timed out as the movement looks stiff.
(My Work)
The secondary animation pass is finished for scenes 15 and 18.
(My Work)
I finished the rough pass for scene 22, the timing needs adjusted as it does not hold on the characters long enough. As this is a Texas standoff scene, I wanted the classic finger twitch and their arms by their sides.
(My Work)
I also roughed out scene 23, Lollipop is speed skating towards the cake to grab it, the arms need work as they look stiff.
(My Work)
Nicole worked on scenes 25, 28, 29, 30, 32, 33 and 35.
(Nicole’s Work)
Feedback
- Lollipop’s arm in scene 17 needs to overshoot up more before coming down to pin the photo to the cork board.
- Adjust the background in scene 22 as well as add some sort of tumbleweed blowing through.
- Fix Lollipop’s arms in scene 23, make them pull back and then swoop towards the cake.
- In scene 25, make Gumball’s arms shake as he pulls the cake away from Lollipop.
- Add the crying child in the center of the scene, hold longer on Lollipop and Gumball’s looks of shame then they have their idea, this means scene 31 needs to be flipped.
- In scene 32 they look too depressed, make them look tired but satisfied, same for scene 33.
- Instead of having the characters pin the picture to the board in scene 35, try transitioning from the picture being taken of the characters with the kid to it zooming out to show the picture.