I adjusted the follow through on Lollipops arms, in scene 11, to make them look less awkward. The body movement has been modified to make him have follow through when he stands. Gumball’s body has more movement to show more expression when he is shocked and abandoned by the kids. I need to adjust the timing.

(My Work)

I started roughing out scene 15-17, Lollipop skids into frame and wraps his arm around the birthday boy.

(My Work)

 

Nicole fixed the follow through on the right arm in scene 3. Roughed out scenes 3, 5, 6 and 19

(Nicole’s Work)

 

Feedback 

  • Adjust Gumballs back arch in scene 8-13 as it looks stiff. 
  • Fix the follow through on Lollipop’s arms in scene 8-13, follow from the elbow. 
  • Adjust the follow through on Gumball’s arm in scene 5. 
  • Make the hand hesitate or pull back before grabbing the photo in scene 19. 

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