There was a good few versions of my storyboards. I think the trouble I kept encountering was over complicating the panels, and because of that the story wasn’t clear when read. So I kept asking for feedback from both the group and the tutors to see what they thought.

 

First Draft:

I was torn between these two storyboards, I got some feedback from my group about changing the transition scene from shadows transformting to close up of a changed eye. When I asked tutors they prefered my original idea with the shadows, so I went forward with that idea.

Second Draft:

I liked the direction of my previous storyboards although I wasn’t noting down the needed key frames and some story was getting lost. So I started the storyboards over again and tried to make them more suitable to be used in an animatic.

 

Third Draft:

After the previous feedback I created the storyboard above, I felt good about the first half but was unsure about the last panels. I asked Alec for some advice and he felt it was unclear of what was happening and the composition was off for one of the shots. So I went back and simplified the panels so they would read more clearly.

The last draft got good feedback, only a small addition of the headmistress staff coming into frame.

 

Last Draft: