After completing all of the previous tasks, I had a draft version of my project that I had the opportunity to present it to my class and tutors in order to showcase what I had created and also take some feedback from them in order to improve my project.

The feedback I was given was that overall the models are impressive and the mysterious and suspensful atmosphere are coming through as intended. I was told that having a more subtle introduction to the car would improve the reveal more. This could be achieved by showing the more generic parts first, then more car parts, then reveal some of the specific race car parts before having the car form into the fully assembled model. I was also suggested to add more “sexy” cinematic shots of the fully assembled cars to really show off the detail of the car itself and my model. Another suggestion was for the lighting to be more than one colour tone to add some depth to the shots. I addressed all of these areas when I created my next draft.

I went back and re-animated some shots, added more lighting or changed it entirely in others and then created a few more shots to put in to improve the narrative of the project. I added more sound and re-edited the project and ended up with a much more complete project.