One on One Tutorial Feedback

I submitted this to Aodhan for feedback. In general, he said it was very good and that the only thing he thought could use some work was the opening scene. He thought it would look clearer if I moved Sylvie back so the arm holding the torch was more visible. Though, he said that it was a change he thought only needed to be made if I have time to do it. I agree with this feedback, as I think it’ll help fill the space more, and while I think the action reads ok, it could be clearer.

Apart from that, my work seems to be going well and Aodhan reminded me the animation didn’t need to be coloured, so I should focus on the animating portion. I

Personally, I have pushed my skillset to try and create a visually interesting animation. I’m quite proud of the progress I’ve made, and I can definitely see personal growth after reviewing previous posts.

Animation Progress #3

I threw in rough backgrounds that are unfinished. I finished animating the last scenes, and I think they turned out really well. I’ve started collecting sound effects for the final edit.

(Edit) – Looking back at this animation clip, an issue I didn’t realise would become a massive problem had already cropped up. The colour layer is slightly misaligned, I hadn’t noticed it prior to this, but it is very obvious after review.

I’ve also begun watching Aaron Blaise’s course on The Fundamentals Of Animation and had been lucky enough to get it for free during an event. It has been greatly informative, in particular the time and spacing and the squash and stretch demonstrations were very useful. I have a better understanding of those concepts.