Following feedback given in a group critic, I fixed my Type specimen screen accordingly. The comments were fair so I was happy to take them on board to allow me to improve.
Below I have included images of my updated specimen screens, from this I will then choose my favourite and submit as my final design.
[Being imported into a blog post has lost some quality]
I have choose this type face specimen, the use of opacity draws my eye as its interesting to view.
The quality is poor, due to the file size of the mock up.
linked below is an figma file to view the design in better quality
https://www.figma.com/file/V2p7foh2q1pYywF0Ux4x8j/Helvetica-VOL-1