After receiving feedback I made some small changes to the layout. I was told that the title was stronger than it should be but I didn’t want to take away the rings, I tried it and it just didn’t look right so instead I made it a bit smaller and made the chorus lyrics a bit bigger. I also rearranged the diamonds a bit and put one in-between the lyrics tot them in more.
Original
Revised version
After another tutorial session I made a slight tweak to the size of the title but I decided not to change the ovals because In like them and I think they fit with the pop genre as ovals and fine lines where two of the trends I found were popular in graphic design. I also think they add a kind of futuristic and alternative feel which I think represents the artist well.
Final Piece
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